Benadryl and ativan

Sorry but no judge is going to give him custody just because she gave her kids Benadryl. And the revenge was 2 pages, longer then her affair.

Finishing my comment, my problem with your story is that I'm reading it before boarding my American Airlines flight to Arizona. What a great time to find this great story. I'll need an extra Benadryl for this one.

So the part about drugging the kids, remember the affair has been going on for about a year. Go look up the prolonged effects of using Benadryl. Not fries your liver sort of thing but definitely something the kids should not be subjected to. She got off way too easy. There should be criminal charges for this and the grandfather should be charged as an accessory.

Drugging the kids and John didn't immediately intervene and confront her and the father before ther next fuckfest? Yes, I know that the author wanted the dramatic confrontation, but in real world, John has a parental duty to protect the children and prevent further drugging of the children, especially since the story suggests that wife is giving larger doses of Benadryl in order to keep them knocked out. And why doesn't he report her to the police? Why does he not prohibit any contact with the slut? She is a danger to them and even in hell-holes like the Caifornia courts, most judges would issue either a no contact order or at the least, supervised visits. So, shocking premise that is pretty well done but husband is way too nice to the slut.

too much of the I don't know why I did that and the drugging of the kids was a bit nasty bit of child abandonment. I think Lynn's settlement and consequences should have been more harsh. Judge should have delivered a harsh and foul humiliating diatribe on how unfit Lynn was to be a mother and order counselling. I'd hope a judge or some child protective services would have prevented visitation over the wife's Benadryl babysitting habit until see completed some humiliating counselling.
The father, he got no consequences out of this really. He only ran away like a coward and lost some money. Should have at least had him cut off by his friends or had some of them kick his ass when they suspected or found out he was fucking one of their wives.
Probably should be in a different category but at least there was a little sex in it. Tag it with BTB too.

First I wanna say is that I’m a fan of the work that I’ve read of yours so far. And that I am no critic I am just a guy that reads six stories on the website and it has eternal writers block myself.
That being said I like the set up for Geo and his background to a certain point although he did seem a little gullible about how much porn in the book he read and then didn’t realize how much he would be desirable he’d be and up with the length of his equipment.
Then his sister being protective of him was one thing but then pretty much jumping his bones of the first Ativan was a warning flag to me. But after she enacted her playing with the twins he went from sort of geeky fun brother character to a bullying asshole in the span of a blink.
When he told the twins and then eventually his sister that he was going to breed them that kind of took me out of the story because it didn’t seem to jive with his attitude before him and his sister had sex.
He just didn’t read is this kind of automatically alpha male type jerk who was more of a bully then the people that bully him. And I have a deep part of me as a person who grew up as a good person myself for what he was dealing with an economy that took me out of the story a great deal when he turned into one.
Now the whole bringing these three girls thing also seems a little out of the blue and kind of the antithesis of a teenage boy. Why would any teenager even if they do have a BBC. Big brother cock, want to be saddled with two children by two girls who started off the story hating him and one by his own sister that just stretches believability even for a silly sex story.
And now positive things descriptions of your sex acts are very well done taking you to the count the logistics of someone having a Lexington Steele size dick. Geo started off as a guy I can see myself hanging out with what he turned into in Chapter 2 just kind of rub me the wrong way.
The mom she’s all right milf be Milfing. And the twins dad he seems all right to.
Overall I’m liking the story and I’m hoping things improve in the next few chapters but I’m gonna keep reading your work and I want nothing more than you continue to put these sex stories out for us horn dogs to read.

God damn give it a rest. Repeating the same fucking things over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over again!!! STOP!!!!!